The bar graph depicts the information about the quantity of carbon emissions(thousand metric tones) in various countries in 1975,1999 and 2005.
As is presented in the graph, USA had significant amount of carbon emission in all the three years. Except Germany and United Kingdom, all other countries had increasing trend from 1975 to 2005. The amount of carbon emission in UK and Canada is always less than 200,000 in all three years. Germany had decreased gradually from 250000 to 200000 by 2005 .China production in carbon emission inclined significantly in 2005 by approximately 15,00,000. In India the carbon emission is increasing seamlessly from 50000 to 350000 over the period of time . China had dramatic inclination from 600000 to just below 1600000 from 1990 to 2005.
To recapitulate, USA and China produced highest carbon , when compared to all other countries, meanwhile Germany is only country that reduced carbon emission smoothly over the period of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38311688312 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86316095671 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3102946835 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.625 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.125 5.23603664747 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190627000204 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100307179929 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685437643945 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131991053264 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289975853246 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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