Dear Dave,
I am writing to complain about the water leakage in kitchen washing area which has occurred many times after repairing it again and again.
The leakage started last week when my maid was cleaning the kitchen wash area and mistakenly she broke the pipe beneath wash basin. I am not sure though how she can break it as the pipe is hard enough to bear any stress.
Initially, the leakage was only a few drops but now the intensity of the flow of water leaking has increased. As a result, wetting the floor and slippery.Moreover, the leaked water get stored the corner beneath the platform, consequently, it starts stinking until stored water is removed manually. I also called a plumber to have this problem resolved but it did not work out as plumber suggested a new pipe instead of fixing the old pipe.
It would be very helpful if you could send a plumber who is more experienced in this field. However, if that is not possible then could you please allow me to buy a new pipe so that this problem can be fixed permanently.Also, I request you to compensate the cost of it from next month's rent.
I hope to hear a solution from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
xxx
- Write a letter to a friend to ask for his her help to collect money for a charity organization The letter needs to cover the following details why do you want to collect money for the charity organization Ask your friend to help explain in detail ho 43
- Write a letter to a friend to ask for his/her help to collect money for a charity organization. The letter needs to cover the following details. - why do you want to collect money for the charity organization? - Ask your friend to help - explain in detail 73
- You recently had an issue with water leaking at your rental property. Write a letter to your landlord to complain about the problem and say– When did it happen?– Describe the problem.– Suggest what could be done about it. 87
- You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work.Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been working. In your letter:•describe the work you have been 73
- You recently had an issue with water leaking at your rental property. Write a letter to your landlord to complain about the problem and say– When did it happen?– Describe the problem.– Suggest what could be done about it. 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 93, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...kitchen washing area which has occurred many time after repairing it again and again. ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... its cost adjusted in next month rent. I hope to hear a solution from you soon....
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37569060773 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21409830667 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668508287293 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2514739633 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155613316821 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520332507789 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036233220355 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0665454431525 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355561192138 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.