Gerontologists, people who study the process of ageing, are getting closer to finding a way to increase the human lifespan significantly. They claim that within the next few decades humans may be able to live for 500 years or more. Would living more 500 years have positive or negative impacts on the world?
Support your responses with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
Much research is done on aging of people and finding the solution “fountain of youth” has been a dream for many storybook characters. Gerontologists, people who study the process of ageing, are getting closer to finding a way to increase the human lifespan significantly and that prospect has both negative and positive impacts on the world. I am inclined to believe it has more negative impact than positive impacts. This essay will discuss both sides of prospects and lead a plausible conclusion.
To commence with, many people have strong desire to live an extraordinarily long life. Many people use the latest technologies to be frozen their bodies and later when science and technology find a solution to reawaken the bodies then they will be reawakened and continue their lives. This literally helps people to come true their dream of immortality and live long live. However, it is unclear that how it could be benefitted to the world as a whole.
On the flip side, as the world is already struggling with lack of resources and increasing population. This prospect to live 500 years long, the world won’t have sufficient resources to provide the population as it has limited resources. If the birth rate continues while at the same the death rate reduces due to a huge increase in lifespan, there will be much more pressure on the finite resources. The world cannot sustain for long if people’s lives to be extended to 500 years.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that how many people are interested in extending their lives by a further four centuries and how, if this became a possibility, it would be a massive problem while yielding no benefits for humankind as a whole.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 289.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02076124567 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88394552595 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567474048443 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2900801945 50.4703680194 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.615384615 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 7.25397266985 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295459388994 0.242375264174 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965257850982 0.0925447433944 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830545361698 0.071462118173 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159042553909 0.151781067708 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501030820689 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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