People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. In your letter,•Describe the problem.•Explain how that is affecting people.•Say what the company should do to help.

Dear Sir,

I am Satpreet Singh, Chairman of Malmo city residents society. I am writing this letter on the behalf of local residents to highlight an issue with the internet connectivity which we are facing for the past one week.

Let me explain the problem in the detail. As mentioned local people are facing lot many issues to connect with the internet and this has been observed since you have changed the main cable it seems that new cable is not properly connected or laid by unskilled workers. Many people already reported this concern to your customer care center, however, no preventive action has been taken place by your side.

So, I would like to request that please look into this matter and solve it as soon as possible, else delay in your respond could lead the people to choose another internet service provider.

Hope this problem will get resolve soon.

Your Faithfully,
Satpreet Singh

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'residents'' or 'resident's'?
Suggestion: residents'; resident's
... Satpreet Singh, Chairman of Malmo city residents society. I am writing this letter on th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 763.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92258064516 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2980243064 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.716129032258 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.9767818637 44.8134815571 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.375 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186154214032 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790268436977 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375395825926 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924456722374 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290380665819 0.0580467560999 50% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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