Some people think cars are a better way of transportation around the city, while other prefer cycling. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Over the decades, people have different thoughts and opinion for the means of transports. Some people feel cars are the best way of traveling within the town, whereas other people preference is cycling. But, I believe both the modes of transportation have their own importance and usages. It depends upon the situation which mode of transportation fulfill the requirement.
With regards to, immovability from one place to other most people prefer cars as better medium of transportation. Firstly, Nowadays, cars are the quickest and fastest mode of traveling. It not only saves our time, also people can cover huge number of miles in shorter period of time. For example, as per researchers, 70% of people prefer to travel by car every day around the city as well as travel long distances such as from their home to offices, for family trips by roads. Secondly, during the summer season most of people prefer traveling in their air conditioner cars to safe guard themselves from crouching heat. As a result of it large number of cars travel on roads everyday. Finally, cars can be used as media of transporting goods from one place to other. By doing so people can save their time, money and labor cost.
On the other hand, some people promote cycling usage in their day to day life instead of cars. Furthermore, cycling is a good source of exercise and keeps people healthy and fit. in today’s busy living lifestyle people have no time to do exercise, so cycling is the best way of keep a person well. Also, by riding more cycle it keeps our environment clean, away from harmful gases and it solve breathing problems. This is the best mode of traveling short distance by keeping ourselves and our environment healthy and safe.
In conclusion, I believe that both the mode of transportation has their own pros and cons. People need to choose the right vehicle according to their requirement and necessity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: period
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
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Suggestion: In
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, in short, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90490797546 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66862879781 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564417177914 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6154485403 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.1578947368 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1578947368 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42105263158 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246764919519 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076962490804 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678163344825 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150897091098 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782802816198 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.