Today technology has improved to a level that it influenced many poeple and made changes in the way they maintain relationship and interact with eachother.Eventhogh it has some negative effects on relationship goals, I believe that positive effects are much more and this essay will go through both these developments of technology on relationship
To begin with, technical help and supports are available at our fingertips now still, we dont consider the relationship with our parents as not presious.Each and everyone wakes upto the social groups and their updates daily.However we never tried to ask our mothers or fathers about their little happiness.Here i remember a comedy clip which says that" a person realised that his family members were very nice people untill his internet is cutoff" .The world is changing to such a situation where nobody is aware of things happening at their home but are very familiar with things at another part of world.
On the otherhand, technology has helped a lot to maintain long distance relationship very effectively.Smartphones with high speed internet facilities makes availability of videocalls and there by help to see them while talking also.So making the mind and feelings to be connected always from miles apart.Moreover, it help to maintain relationship with our old and childhood friends through social groups like facebook twitter.
To conclude, even if technology has some detrimental effect on keeping relationship with other fellows it help a lot to lead long distance relationship strong.So in my opinion, every technolgy should be used at the minimum advised level for more roductive outcome
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, while, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3908045977 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26303194295 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647509578544 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 87.0 20.2975951904 429% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 300.899761826 49.4020404114 609% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 469.0 106.682146367 440% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 87.0 20.7667163134 419% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.6666666667 7.06120827912 378% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191620216145 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117549446565 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386743960897 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114914721421 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542828312989 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 47.5 13.0946893788 363% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -25.29 50.2224549098 -50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 38.4 11.3001002004 340% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.17 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.19 8.58950901804 142% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 61.0 9.78957915832 623% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 36.8 10.1190380762 364% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 61.0 10.7795591182 566% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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