The media should include more stories which report good news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A few subjects are as likely to provoke controversy as more good stories should be contained on the media. I completely agree with this view.
On the one hand, there are myriads of demerits when the media have less good stories. Firstly, crime scenes are overly reported on the television, ergo, youngsters could imitate these wrong behaviors simply which breed future offenders. A good example of this case would be that various criminal news on TV programs daily in presents which make a contribution to form bad people’s actions. Secondly, the contents of natural disasters such as green house, global warming or ice melting would make people more pessimistic view about future.
On the other hand, we should not turn a blind eye to the desirable merits. It is noticeable that numerous stories on the TV might trigger seriously people to feel a sense of admiration towards those making efforts to protect the Earth. Volunteer frequently have a hand in spending a certain number of hours on service to their community and is instrumental in wild animal preservation that make a good model for citizens to feel motivated to do the same. Furthermore, these good contents are factors in making people coexist harmoniously in a community, hence, helping them grasp the meaning of law-abiding mindset. As a result, citizens could stay away from criminal activities.
After discussing all points discussed above, it is therefore safe to conclude that the media need to comprise more good news on their programs, instead of bad contents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nteer frequently have a hand in spending a certain number of hours on service to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, second, secondly, therefore, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09881422925 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75326447096 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648221343874 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6010335814 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.5 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226357385248 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721763742548 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578947433787 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142771105556 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575509934369 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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