Now with the help of genetic engineering parents can choose the gender and physical characteristics of child whatever they want and what are the advantages and disadvantages of this development
Scientists have made a major discovery in genetic engineering. They can now alter the genes of any living beings and design a perfect human beings. I believe, this scientific development brings both positive and negative impacts which would be discussed below
On the one side, this advancement in science effectively fulfils the desires of parents to have baby with specific treats.Each parents think about the baby but all are do not capable for this and sometimes they hurt badly while, now those parents fill their own wishes through the genetic engineering. Because due to this genes transfer one to another mother at last conceive the baby .Secondly, this scientific step towards development contributes to curb population too.Most of the people want to a baby boy erratically this is not happen in reality but they continuously try and born girl child as a result of this, population is growing day by day. However, due to the genetic engineering takes a genes of baby boy and inject to the mother.
The flip side of the coin , it is an unnatural process which is not anymore justify in most of the society. First of all, every one does not give the preference to this because sometimes some culture as well as traditions does not allow to these types of methods. Second of all, cloning with genetic engineering is too expensive. It can not be affordable by everyone especially poor people.
In conclusion, there are many fruitful uses of genetic engineering however, it can not be neglected the some loopholes of this technique.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94208494208 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74940553015 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.846610298 49.4020404114 243% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 128.0 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254902709691 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089593919199 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567839784985 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142005386036 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444146455404 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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