The Chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries.
The bar chart illustrates the humankind are done science qualifications in Malaysia and Singapore. The data calibrated in percentage.
Have a look on the Malaysian people, approximately 65% persons are not qualified in science however, less than a third masses school leaving after the exams. It has followed by the bachelor's degree is completed only 10% individuals.
By having a glance on the other people who not get qualification in science, the data recorded exactly 60% mankind do not participates whereas, 30% less than folks noticed in school leaving exams as compare to the former in Singapore. A fifths percent mankind are doing bachelor degree on the other hand, both countries people levelled off near around a 5% in master and bachelor degree.
Overall, most of the people no qualifications in science in Malaysia as well as Singapore while, both are stagnant on master degree.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'participate'?
Suggestion: participate
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A fifth' or simply 'fifths'?
Suggestion: A fifth; Fifths
... as compare to the former in Singapore. A fifths percent mankind are doing bachelor degr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, third, well, whereas, while, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 749.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16551724138 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95455874206 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634482758621 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1056892278 43.030603864 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5714285714 5.23603664747 221% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144407056476 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648683845007 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640416323143 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971692758069 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500156233784 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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