You recently visited a store and did not like the customer service there. Write a letter to the store manager and say:
1) What was the issue there?
2) Why wasn't the staff helpful?
3)Suggest what can be done about it?
Dear sir or madam,
I feel the need to bring to your knowledge the ongoing issues at your store. I had tried to guide the employees on the right path, but it seems nobody is concerned. Allow me to elaborate.
I am a frequent customer at your store and have been buying household articles as well as groceries. However, at the time when I am returning back home at around 11 pm at night, I see a group of young people holding a gun in public and smoking marijuana which is in contravention of the law of the land.
Further, I was under the impression that the staff was not aware of the happening near the store. As such, I decided to approach the person on duty at the counter and apprised of the daily routine of the group members outside the store. Further, the person was not even surprised and told me that the matter will be looked into. The issue has been prolonged by your staff members and no effective solution has been reached. Thus, I will be constrained to report about the ongoing problem to the relevant authority.
I am aware that you do not look into the business anymore, however, in case, something goes wrong the authorities will hold you accountable and eventually your business will suffer. I request you to empathize with me and take prompt action in the said regard and reprimand your staff.
I hope for an immediate resolution to the problem.
Yours sincerely,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returning'.
Suggestion: returning
...oceries. However, at the time when I am returning back home at around 11 pm at night, I see a ...
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Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: PM_IN_THE_EVENING[2]
Message: Use simply 'pm'.
Suggestion: pm
...n I am returning back home at around 11 pm at night, I see a group of young people holding ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...aid regard and reprimand your staff. I hope for an immediate resolution to the...
^
Line 12, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lution to the problem. Yours sincerely, Brad Jason
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, so, thus, well, i feel, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1161.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 253.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58893280632 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.537654068 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592885375494 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1153482238 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9285714286 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130023187668 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440562083461 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424452210345 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0608975450609 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050261796855 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.