Tourism has caused environmental problems in many parts of the world. What sort of problems has been caused and what can be done about them?
There have been challenges to the well being of the environment poised by the movement of people, from one place to another, seeking relaxation and fun. Overtime, this has presented a burden on the need to have a clean and sustainable ecosystem. The drawbacks are dire; however efforts can be made to curb continuous deterioration.
One of the major disservice done to the environment from Tourism is the overwhelming burden on different modes of transportation that spiral down to consequential harm. For example, people move from one continent to another, from far and wide and therefore make use of air travel. Although, its the fastest means and more convenient; the need to bombard our air space with countless trips of flights have adverse effect on air pollution, as jet fuel - a proceed from carbon - is still the main source of energy that powers this means of transport.
In as much as there is always the need to travel by air, there should be measures put in place to monitor over dependence of air transport for solely Tourism purposes. For instance, intending travellers should make use of land transport - especially the non fossil fuel models (electric cars, bicycles) - for short distance trips and cut down on frequent need to travel long distances thereby reducing dependency on air transportation.
In conclusion, the need for engaging oneself in act of learning and leisure through Tourism is essential but come with a cost on the environment, in most cases through air transport. However measures to put restraint is necessary and also important.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...efore make use of air travel. Although, its the fastest means and more convenient; ...
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Line 3, column 453, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... effect on air pollution, as jet fuel - a proceed from carbon - is still the main source ...
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Line 7, column 184, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...t, in most cases through air transport. However measures to put restraint is necessary ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09302325581 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90416634462 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585271317829 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.4803730435 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.4 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0578403015217 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0272474594188 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279269241622 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0393009126509 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195885482619 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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