The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009.
The given four circular chart reveals the information about the different two nation which show the electricity generated from all sources till the year 2009.the data is calibrated in percentum.
It can be seen that the electricity generated in Germany from all sources.the highest source of electricity was 59.6% and the lowest source of electricity was 17.47%.However in Germany the conventional thermal, nuclear and renewable was 59.6%,23.0% and 17.4% respectively.
As far as trend was concerned that in france the highest source of electricity was nuclear 76.0%.a part from that the lowest source of electricity was renewable 13.7%.moreover, the sub parts of the renewable hydroelectric,solar,wind and biomass was 10.5%,0.9%,10.5% and 8.1% respectively.
Overall, it is evident that in france, the electricity generated highest (nuclear 76.0%) and, in Germany the electricity generated lowest (59.6%).
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'chart' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'charts'.
Suggestion: charts
The given four circular chart reveals the information about the diffe...
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Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'nation' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'nations'.
Suggestion: nations
...the information about the different two nation which show the electricity generated fr...
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Line 2, column 166, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...lowest source of electricity was 17.47%.However in Germany the conventional thermal, nu...
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Line 2, column 166, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...lowest source of electricity was 17.47%.However in Germany the conventional thermal, nu...
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Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , solar
...sub parts of the renewable hydroelectric,solar,wind and biomass was 10.5%,0.9%,10.5% a...
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Line 4, column 56, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'generated the highest'.
Suggestion: generated the highest
...evident that in france, the electricity generated highest nuclear 76.0% and, in Germany the elec...
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Line 4, column 95, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... generated highest nuclear 76.0% and, in Germany the electricity generated lowest...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 773.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 133.0 196.424390244 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81203007519 4.92477711251 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.39596269041 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.64162902085 2.65546596893 137% => OK
Unique words: 68.0 106.607317073 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511278195489 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 224.1 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.865843237 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 193.25 112.824112599 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.25 22.9334400587 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.427966438503 0.215688989381 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.254497893895 0.103423049105 246% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668214028927 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254497893895 0.15604864568 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668214028927 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.6 13.2329268293 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 61.2550243902 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.51609756098 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.3012195122 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.01 11.4140731707 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 11.4329268293 188% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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