toady school should teach their students how to survive financially in the world today .. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement ?
There are umpteen subjects which a pupil will learn during their school life such as Physics , Maths, Biology which will prove lucrative for them in their whole life. on this occasion,some people deem that finance should be a subject in school so students will also be able to eradicate money related issues . In the subsequent paragraphs, I will discuss both pros and cons with relevant ideas . Considering the merits, currently , adolescent spend too much money on that thing which are not really needed by them if finance will be subject in a school then they will be able to know about momentous of each and every ruppee if teacher will give the example of that persons who are grappling for only a coin for peaceful livelihood. Furthermore , a plethora of children suffer from money related problems when they start their graduation or master's degree if they will develop themselves according to such situation then they will be able to tackle the situation with calm and courage.
On the flipside, it has various disadvantages. First and foremostly, this subject teach them about various finance related challenges which they may face in their future life and every learner is looking for bright future . perhaps student will give more attention to this then ultimately the value of othee subjects can go down .
To recapitulate , after discussing all the above statements it is vivid that advantages of this ideology overweigh the disadvantages so finance education is good .
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- toady school should teach their students how to survive financially in the world today .. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement ? 65
- toady school should teach their students how to survive financially in the world today To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement 64
- toady school should teach their students how to survive financially in the world today .. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement ? 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, look, may, really, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07407407407 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67942373271 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609053497942 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.6560626413 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0855816466407 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385996793433 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.022929425741 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0522560698753 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183333791797 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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