The importance of whether parents should be held reliable for the unlawful activities which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of increase in juvenile crime has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend in the recent years. In my perspective, the latter proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my reasons for favoring the negative effect of this trend and this will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that teen age is a transitional period for children and therefore they are easily mislead into evils of the society. For instance, according to the recent research in one of eminent university of the world, it has found that during teen age, it is media and their peers who have a greater impact on them rather than their parents. Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that at this age, children come out of the shadows of their parents. Needless to say, these demerits have a for reaching impact on the life of both parents as well as children.
Elaborating my view point this trend has more demerits but one of the crucial one is that punishing the parents who have not committed the crime is lawfully unjustified. As a result, it is unfair to punish them for a misdeed they never did. Besides, when the parents come to know about their children illegal activities, they already undergo a lot of pain, so it is not ethical to take a punitive action against them. Hence, it is apparent why many are against the notion of punishing parents.
According to this argument aforementioned above, one can reach a conclusion that the drawbacks of parents being hold responsible for their child crime are indeed too dire to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 20.9802955665 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1207.87684729 133% => OK
No of words: 328.0 242.827586207 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90243902439 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6252885737 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545731707317 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 506.7 379.143842365 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.1336106849 50.4703680194 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.692307692 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2307692308 20.9669160288 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162099146475 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591502682776 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485809923011 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104256522085 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235708356234 0.0609392437508 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 55.0591133005 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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