Globalisation and technology has influenced our nations greatly. So that, people are allowed to purchase same things throughout the world making each and every country similiar. Eventhough, this can be seen as a positive development, I believe, in someways or the other it will create negative effects to our country as well. This essay will see how of both thses affect a country.
On the onehand, globalisation will result in easy availability of all foreign brands in our country making it popular and costlier compared to our products. For example, bags and shoes even dresses children and adults use today are brands from most of the developed countries like America(American Tourister)or Germany(Adidas).The aftereffect of this practice mainly result in reduction in the demand for our products which much cheaper than this.
On the otherhand, Local shops and retailers in a country especially developing are negatively influenced by this. They are forced to try their products in other marckets inorder to have profit due decreased demand. For that the product should meet all the standards set by international trading systemmaking the large scale production much costly and altogether making fall in the trading.
Overall, globalisation will give positive implication to developed countries only but, in developing countries it will always results in negative impacts
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4882629108 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0690511072 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647887323944 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3698645181 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.9 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22709972142 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872791094299 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682454524753 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145161370627 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390410852583 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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