Some people believe tjey should keep all the money have earned and should not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree
Giving money and power to government is like giving whisky and car keys to teenage boys. As it truely said that govrnment plays an important role in every one's life as it is responsible for development country through taxes giving by the public. Tbe given topic asserts that should individual keep their earnings or giving some portion to government as taxes. I am completely disagree with the given statement and shall explore the dimensions in the upcoming paragraphs and shape up my opinion by the end.
First and formost, every person have to pay taxes to government because, it prooves very helpful for the development of country. There are so many machines develop in the country which is very helpful to cure the problems. When we pay taxes to the government than, they will built some hospital in which persons can cure theirselves and there near once at very low price. Secondly paying taxes also will help to improves the infrastructure of country like big building, supermarket these are helping the people in many ways.
Moreover, taxes also increase our safety. For instance, when we give taxes to government it will surely make our defence system strong. The soliders rate is increase and it adopt safety for the general public. Furthermore the biggest investment of taxes is in the education sector. If we are educated then we can do anything. Education simply defines the persons status. Taxes to government will open new schools where primary education of student is done. After that taxes will give help to old age person with pensions.
To sum up, i tend to believe that money pays in the form of taxes is lead to development of the country. I would like to say that every person have pay taxes as it proves very beneficial and also helps make some government helps offices like hospitals and schools which help the people of below poverty line.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: disagreed
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...prooves very helpful for the development of country. There are so many machines d...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'build'
Suggestion: build
...taxes to the government than, they will built some hospital in which persons can cure...
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...g. The soliders rate is increase and it adopt safety for the general public. Furtherm...
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...nt of taxes is in the education sector. If we are educated then we can do anything...
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... anything. Education simply defines the persons status. Taxes to government will open n...
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...e primary education of student is done. After that taxes will give help to old age pe...
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...age person with pensions. To sum up, i tend to believe that money pays in the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85625 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50342733817 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.0608445753 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3333333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189944934575 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572094321572 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496179063071 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116974964804 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369189740928 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.