A builder worked in your house a few weeks ago. You did not like the result of his work. Write a letter to him and say.
- Describe the work you wanted him to do.
- What is your complaint about his job?
- What do you expect him to do about it?
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with your work on my home ceiling that you claimed to accomplish few weeks ago, on Midland Street.
I was supposed to get my ceiling renovated, to get rid of the rain water leakage over the reception room. Unfortunately, that never happened.
I regret to inform you that your service was below my expectations. As after few days from completing your job, rain water started to come in again from the same old spots. In addition, some parts of the ceiling above the main bedroom are not well attached, hence, it produce noises whenever the wind below.
I believe this matter deserves your urgent attention and I hope you can settle it by coming back and re-fix the ceiling or make a refund with all the labor cost that you had charged me. Otherwise, I will file a complaint at the city builders union.
I look forward to hearing from you
Yours sincerely,
Jeaden
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 269, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'produces'?
Suggestion: produces
...edroom are not well attached, hence, it produce noises whenever the wind below. I be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, look, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 782.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76829268293 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56834016587 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.69512195122 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5674959049 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8888888889 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187030017124 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696492648918 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060698689589 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977522755942 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623854916303 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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