Some people think that government should provide unemployed people with a free mobile phones and free access to the internet to help them find a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion?
One of the most controversial issue today relates to unemployment. Many people thinks when government should provide unemployed people with a free mobile phone and internet to help them find a jobs. I am totally disagree this statement.
Nowadays, mostly people are unemployed in our country, and this is not good for us. Apart from this, some people think when government should provide free mobile phones and internet for unemployed people then it is very easy to find jobs. According to me, it is wrong because how we are 100% sure if government should provide that things for unemployed people then they will use only find their jobs. In these days, mostly unemployed people take drugs in our country and spoil their future so, when they will misuse these things in their life it is very dangerous for us.
As far as, government are responsible for unemployed. Because they are never provide jobs so, that's why some people take drugs because these type of people have always negative thinking then they feel depressed that's why they are taking drugs. Furthermore, if government should provide free mobile phone and internet for these type of people then they will advertising for drugs. So, that's why I think it is very dangerous for all human beings.
Overall, Government should provide jobs for all people when they do jobs then they never take drugs or never do bad things in their life because they are very busy in their jobs. They never have been time for think about these disgusting things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 192, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a job' or simply 'jobs'?
Suggestion: a job; jobs
...le phone and internet to help them find a jobs. I am totally disagree this statement. ...
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Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
... to help them find a jobs. I am totally disagree this statement. Nowadays, mostly peo...
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Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...ople then it is very easy to find jobs. According to me, it is wrong because how we are 100% su...
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Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
... for unemployed. Because they are never provide jobs so, thats why some people take dru...
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Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...Because they are never provide jobs so, thats why some people take drugs because thes...
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ative thinking then they feel depressed thats why they are taking drugs. Furthermore,...
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Line 5, column 358, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'advertise'
Suggestion: advertise
...for these type of people then they will advertising for drugs. So, thats why I think it is ...
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Line 5, column 385, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...en they will advertising for drugs. So, thats why I think it is very dangerous for al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, then, apart from, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88326848249 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34490605021 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451361867704 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9712027681 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5384615385 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342289747022 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149540319293 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.169598978482 0.0667982634062 254% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259164342027 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124640924399 0.056905535591 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.42 8.58950901804 75% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 78.4519038076 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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