In town and cities, the large shopping mall should replace the small local shop. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Discuss.
Recently, the phenomenon of utilizing the large shopping malls instead of lacal and small ones and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although this replacement is beneficial as it regarded by the substantial number of individuals, others hold opponents views. I am inclined to believe that this decision can be plus as it could develop some brilliant aspects for its adherents.
From a social standpoint, there are several advantages of constructing large malls as the shopping centers instead of expanding and developing the small ones. These reasons are rooted in the fact of development. From my own experience, when I was a university students, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the merits of big malls in modern cities. Firstly, this idea is enhance the concentration. It means by concentrate an array of shops and other services in one place, some big problems will be addressed including the amount of traffic in the whole city will be diminished because loads of transmissions will be cancelled. Furthermore, due to this concentration, the prices will be balanced. Shoppers cannot offer high prices because customers campare them with the others. Moreover, customers have a number of options to choose. In addition, due to preparing other facilities beside them including parking lots, customers have easy access to go there.
On the one hand, there is no doubt, replacing large malls instead of the local ones has some opponents. They argued that the cost of constructing them is extreme high and the local shops cannot afford to buy or rent one of them. Hence, some owners who have the small shops will lost their jobs.
In conclusion, while there are several arguments on both sides, I believe that the benefits of using shopping malls are more outweigh of the small ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'enhanced'.
Suggestion: enhanced
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
...me owners who have the small shops will lost their jobs. In conclusion, while the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, moreover, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 298.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14429530201 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86014922393 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 139.433497537 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580536912752 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1984423374 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8125 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198218117552 0.242375264174 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605771722377 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660325499628 0.071462118173 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135010153662 0.151781067708 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386005505623 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 55.0591133005 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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