Every year several languages die out. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier when there are fewer languages. To what extent to do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Every year several languages die out. It's always been a debatable topics whether this extinction of language is in any way helpful for mankind or not. In my opinion it is good that few languages are at its end.
Firstly if we go back to history and try to find out most of political and communal conflicts arise due to difference in languages and religion. What has divided mankind from day one is language. Humans, Adam and Eve, our ancestors are all of same flash and blood divided by language. A true fact is that language is not important but communication is. So it doesn't matter how and what language you communicate in until and unless message is conveyed.
On the other hand let's look at the pros of less language on earth. Less language will make communication lot more easier across boundaries resulting in enhanced job opportunities, unity within the nations, cross cultural enhancements to name a few. However, the biggest advantage will be towards the growth of science. Today we are divided and segregated by the language, if we cross this barrier we can take the human race to next level with diverse knowledge and experience coming from each country.
Finally extinction of languages will definitely help bring peace among human. People connect with each other through language and divides in similar fashion. Dying languages will surely have its own adversities like the history will become dark. Lack of several language will complicate understanding our ansistorial languages without any doubt. But if it makes our future better in anyway then it's worth it.
To conclude I would say what divides people today can be a key to bring unity and peace. Lesser language will lead to uplift in human connectivity issues resulting in making world a better place to live in. So, I Second the thought that it is not important that several languages are dying out every year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'been'.
Suggestion: been always
...ery year several languages die out. Its always been a debatable topics whether this extinct...
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Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'topic'?
Suggestion: topic
...es die out. Its always been a debatable topics whether this extinction of language is ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...t important but communication is. So it doesnt matter how and what language you commun...
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Line 7, column 110, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...ss language will make communication lot more easier across boundaries resulting in enhanced...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...perience coming from each country. Finally extinction of languages will definitely...
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Line 10, column 255, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun language seems to be countable; consider using: 'several languages'.
Suggestion: several languages
...e the history will become dark. Lack of several language will complicate understanding our ansis...
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Line 10, column 381, Rule ID: IN_ANYWAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in any way'?
Suggestion: in any way
...oubt. But if it makes our future better in anyway then its worth it. To conclude I w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, so, then, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93146417445 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63419172473 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604361370717 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0197317192 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.15 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.05 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268910436986 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897168815675 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840849239561 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156861232387 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502927669652 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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