Some peoples believe that the housing should be provided by the government for underprivileged and people who can't afford to buy a house. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement. Give examples based on your own experience...
It is often observed that much more poor people stay as homeless all over the world was government authorities should emphasis on such scenarios to deny it into the minimised level, eventually into zero mode in accordance with certain plans, though the primary plan involves building houses at off cost for poor. Following paragraphs of the essay will elucidate with two major reasons why the government should focus on such issues followed by my endorsement.
First and foremost reason for the government should be wedded the poor for constructing or even buy a home because it is the basic responsibility of a local regulatory authority which is a government where they stand as a source of support for them. For example in India, the various homeless peoples are depended with local government authorities to build homes. In addition, it is important that wider steps be implemented by government authorities to overcome such hurdles among overwhelmed poor peoples. For that government should initiate such home building activity and be implemented.
Secondly, the poor people play an important role in maintaining the custom and traditions of their country, typically the traditional arts. For example in India itself, the poor peoples stay over the countrysides are off homes mostly but they downs and follows traditional arts which cannot make synthetically or buy at high cost or else. However, if they are lacking basic resources like houses, they would leave such blessed skills and imitate or follow other lifestyle mainly for living. Hence it is highly recommended to save them precisely. moreover , the poor people namely farmers, help to produce the endogenous corps which considering as a kind of custom wich had been trasfred through verbal communication which will exists till those poor people vanishes. Therefore it is necessary to protect them.
In conclusion I strongly endorse the notion that the government might be solely responsible for providing basic resource like home for poors, though it m is help full for maintaining those countries customs and traditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27627627628 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83126063595 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.6201187969 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.153846154 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200479491981 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754420233631 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516827360152 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128262383779 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392780520987 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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