People in all modern societies use drugs but today's youth are experinnmeeting with vboth legal and illegal drugs and at increasingly early age. Some sociologists clainnot that parents and other members of society often set bad example discuss some causes and effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern society
in the current time of technological advancements, one of the most pressing concern is regarding the given topic that what are the reasons that present youth is increasingly becoming addict to drugs, and it's results? I shall explore the same from various aspects of the topic through examples and assertions.
the first step to think is that why present generation is over using drugs. there is chain of reasoning behind this. first and foremost, teens usually start taking drugs due to influence of their elders. if parents of one's child are taking some legal drugs such as alcohol, and tobacco daily their wards will also slowly become habitual of these. because they never understand the harmful results of those drugs. moreover, some youngsters are also addicted to caffeine which is also a kind of legal drug. as a quintessence, during the survey conducted by Britain university it observed that two third of Americans take coffee twice a day.
another fact to consider is that, company of a young gun is also a root cause that they take drugs. bad company always shows wrong direction as , others encourage one to have a taste of drugs like heroine, and cockein which easily become a person slaveer of it. when the young brigades be habitual of this it become hard for them to give it up. similarly, after some time they sell these drugs in large amount of money. As a instance, daily in some countries like india where two or three cases of heroine smugglers come in news. Therefore, it should be onus of parents to have a watch on their children and their friends, if find anything wrong must talk to their children about negating results of such addiction on their lives.
to elucidate, manifold answers are provided to the topic. Although, I believe that it should be responsibility of both; caretakers, and political bodies to distance their generation from these bad evils . parents must not leave their wards isolated and governments should bring awareness among youth regarding the harmful effects of such drugs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, regarding, similarly, so, therefore, third, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91253644315 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53318077344 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588921282799 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1548866326 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6111111111 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0555555556 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136245730733 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401765530105 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413650472721 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759260736877 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361123477811 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.