From a broad perspective, people around the world, believe that its more relaxing to exercise than to watch movie or read a book. Therefore, it is a far fetched idea to opine that. However, it depends solely on a persons standpoint from the viewed direction. There is a rapid rate at which people contend with the above mentioned, I personally concur with this idea by elaborating on my ample evidence provided in my ensuing paragraphs.
The most crucial point coming to my mind to expand my perspective is concerned with the fact that watching movies or reading a book is the best method of relaxing because it is significantly, less strenuous in the sense that the eyes and mind is involved. the fact with watch a movie is accompanied with the use of the eyes to depicts the story line of the film which less vigorous compared to exercising. Undoubtedly that exercise help to improve the health status its often requires abundant effort to complete the task unlike watching a movie. For example my friend and I visited a movie theater to relax which was useful because the atmosphere was comforting and the movie gave us a time avoid thought about bad moments in our life's. Exercise is require assiduous effort during practice than watching a movie.
Furthermore, this approach towards relaxation helps to improve our listening and reading skills which bolsters our personality. This kind of method equally brings out the best as well as influencing other individuals positively. During reading of a book, it helps to foster and build the vocabulary structure of the person reading. New set of words are discovered in each chapter in the book which can be implied to the daily life of the fellow. For instance I read a book few years back titled 'Think big' by Ben Casen there were certyain words like exquisite, obnoxious and so on. I seared for the supposed meaning an equally ampied to my life, my friend around were astonishing and i refereed them to the book. Thats way in which I relax.
Finally, exercise comprises of fervency which is hard to drive, but improves interaction between people when jogging skating and so on. on the other hand, watching a movie or reading is more advantageous even though, it improves communication as well as instigate the better bond among people by presenting them with the awareness of this they prefer doing.
In conclusion, to sum up my opinion, i wailing demonstrate that its most likely to watch movies or read a book than it is to exercise.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2060.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80186480186 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69283741345 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536130536131 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.252666299 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.421052632 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5789473684 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52631578947 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227261301796 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717820255873 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708654376629 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142273091538 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558709748291 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.