Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Most advertisements make products seem much better then they really are.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Most advertisements make products seem much better then they really are.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Submitted by Mrf70 on Wed, 07/04/2018 - 10:44

By and large, it's established beyond the doubt that advertisement is one of the important factors for attracting the customers, so, the companies need to be organized in this context for supporting themselves in the business. As matter of the fact, nowadays companies are aware of the knowledge of customers; hence, they try dramatically to demonstrate their quality in the right way. After regarding different factors into consideration, I totally support this notion that advertisements should show the truth, thus, I do not agree with this idea that most advertisements make exaggeration for showing their products. In the following, I will elaborate more details to explain my point of view.

The first exquisite points need to be mentioned is that people are more aware of the quality of each product. A plethora of people are of the opinion that the best advertisement will attract the more customer, therefore, it is noticeable to be considered that according to the knowledge of the customers the policy of the companies for demonstrating their ability have changed. By way of examples, in the past, due to people were not very knowledgeable about the products, their quality and value, so, the companies for being a winner in this competition, they always exaggerated about the products and convinced people with a gift if they bought their products. This policy has altered because today people never put themselves and their health in the detrimental situation just because of gift or etc. The awareness of people limited the companies to the condition that if they want to be successful in the competition, they should try hard and improve their quality in right way. Thus, in the advertisements, they will demonstrate the trust.

There is another factor that deserves some words is that the government policies are in the conditions that support customers. If the companies need to achieve reputation, they need to acquire the confirmation and certification from government organ. According to the survey has been conducted by experts demonstrated that today's people are of the conviction that if the government let the companies to ad their products, so, they are reliable because have a standard in this context. Consequently, the reliance of people on the government is very considerable and enhance the companies to obtain the best standard for convincing their customers.

To put it all in nutshell, by considering all aforementioned reasons, I believe that today's companies not only try very hard to acquire the certifications but also need to be update an account of customers knowledge and persuade them just by their quality. As a whole, companies for succeeding need right ad.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, by and large

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2272.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19908466819 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07351874854 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45766590389 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 703.8 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.7160305143 48.9658058833 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.0 100.406767564 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3125 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0867129948484 0.236089414692 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0325150764363 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386320577963 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0551669892664 0.150856017488 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454833222546 0.0645574589148 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 11.7677419355 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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