One should only use enough to fulfill their needs and rest should to given to needy . You agree I disagree.
"Money is not the only answer, but it makes a difference" One of the most controversial issues today related to that which money fulfilled our basic needs ; those other distributed into needy person or not? Through this essay . I am going to examine this question from my point of views. I completely agree to this statement.
To recapitulate, that their is no single answer to this question. However, I trend to believe that 'government some guidelines build up".
To begin with, they are group and people believe that people who distributed their money after fulfill of needs. However, the most suitable steps puts by public . Regarding this, fundamentaly development of economy takes place . Afterthat, this are the most suitable reason through politics helped. Whereas, the development willy-nilly come to pass. Subsequently, through development to automatically improvement also occur into all sector .as well as , they have dramatically include into literacy level for epitome, education A survey either conducted by California university or school based on 'rest money distributed into needy person ' into this survey gives awareness about person own requirement , right for everyone.
Secondly, at final stages shows that when education level either develop or fundamentaly literacy level also build up about this reason. However, there have some issues for education level about politics point views. However, they ruduce the crime level because, people are well educated from past time whereas, because crime in every country main problem facing about everyone. Afterthat, it has occur on everyone's education point. For example, A survey conducted by Hindustan newspaper about education level into improvements build for proper development of nation however, the government neither makes any work without public nor improvements came up there.morever, they depend on government working based. All the children awareness about they 60% people are placed below to poverty line moreover, government puts some legal for proper authorities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, for example, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63870967742 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89423258887 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587096774194 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 90.5760883334 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1111111111 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.059131574887 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0189576426949 0.084324248473 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351417845493 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0486070252897 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428129335433 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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