Some people believe that presenting natural environment is a crucial however most make no efforts to do so? why do you think this is happening? what are simple action that could help the environment.
Environment plays important role in healthy life style. Today topic asserts that Is our responsibility to protect the environment or not?l am agree with that we all should be protect the our atmosphere. I shall explore my point of view in below paragraph.
Firstly, we can see that today population is increasing day by day, and reson behind this people are not aware about this problem. As well as, to fulfill the requirements of the people, deforestation is rise very much. At the result, it has big problem for environment. We should try to aware people about family planning. The best illustration can be a policy made by Indian government, who provide a many facilities to a family have a two children only.
Secondly, in one family everyone have their own vehicle. No one of them nether use old vehicles nor drive other family vehicles. That's why air pollution became increase day by day also people face many problems regarding to health. The suitable example can be policy in Delhi, is"odd even" .
Overall, it is responsibility of all. Government can make a policies but it our responsibility to follow these rules for protection of environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
... to protect the environment or not?l am agree with that we all should be protect the ...
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Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'protected'?
Suggestion: protected
...t?l am agree with that we all should be protect the our atmosphere. I shall explore my ...
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Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'our'?
Suggestion: the; our
...gree with that we all should be protect the our atmosphere. I shall explore my point of...
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Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...increasing day by day, and reson behind this people are not aware about this problem...
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Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... two children only. Secondly, in one family everyone have their own vehicle. ...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...hicles nor drive other family vehicles. Thats why air pollution became increase day b...
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Line 5, column 301, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... policy in Delhi, is'odd even' . Overall, it is responsibility of a...
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Line 5, column 304, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...licy in Delhi, is'odd even' . Overall, it is responsibility of all. Go...
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Line 7, column 59, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a policy' or simply 'policies'?
Suggestion: a policy; policies
...ponsibility of all. Government can make a policies but it our responsibility to follow the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 195.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02564102564 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98208939216 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.687179487179 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.379113854 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9285714286 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0778420044116 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0242320746013 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0236534729099 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0452273474959 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00954780259402 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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