Having domestic pets are very common in western countries as they prefer pets both for companionship and security. But others have opinions against this from the hygienical and harmfulness point of view. In this essay i will analyse the beneficial aspects of having pets before reaching a concrete conclusion.
It is considered that pets are worthy of being good companionship because of their trusty behaviour. Many people who are alone or feel lonely normally prefer to have pets as their close ones. They experience great enjoyments with pets and sometimes spend a lot of time together which gradually enhance the emotional bonds between human and animal that could be lasted forever.
Moreover, pets are also used as strong security guards of their owner's houses and in this case dogs are very skillful to perform this role. Furthermore, dogs are good smellers and can easily identify intruders and also have capacity to give alarm to their owners in any dangers for instance fire.
Nevertheless, there are some harmful effects may occur if proper maintanance is not ensured. For example , if timely vaccination is not regulated then certain zoonotic diseases such as rabies, plague, canine distemper may be happened which could bring death to the pet owners if early diagnosis fail. The cost of treatments and feeding are also extremely expensive.
To sum up, pets are regarded as true friends for their owners no matter what the costs are required to maintain them. But some pets are too costly to be thought as wastage of money. The issue of hygienic control can be ensured by proper caring to them.
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Those warning messages are
Those warning messages are mistakes you need to take care of, like:
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 219, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...armfulness point of view. In this essay i will analyse the beneficial aspects of ...
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Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... maintanance is not ensured. For example , if timely vaccination is not regulated ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05992509363 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54137898607 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640449438202 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2522188766 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257720342047 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824080099948 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050083541798 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130869844707 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415805473592 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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