At present, using the nuclear technology has become one of the cheif concerning issue throughout the world, as it has both positive and negative feedbacks. However, the destructive nature of this is much more well known to the world than peaceful sites which also have some minor risks.
The wide applications are generally observed in the nuclear powerstations where it is used for the generation of cheap energy, which are mainly supplied to the large industrialized companies and also in some developing countries. But, it has serious threat due to its leakage problem, which may be happened suddenly and radiation would spread. This will cause meltdowns of plants.
Nuclear technology is also used in medical treatments specially for treating cancer through damaging the cancerous cells. This is actually a dangerous method and also very painful. This procedure may not always be successful.
The most worrying aspect of nuclear technology is its use in military purposes. There are huge amounts of atomic bombs are prepared by many countries which are great threat to human existence. So, it is possible to destroy the whole world within some moments by using these bombs. Technological advancement paves the way for the peoples of wealthy nations to make such kinds of bombs for example, some days ago, North Korea started to test their nuclear weapons in border regions of their country which had serious disputes among the leaders of developed nations. By taking initiatives and agreements ,North Korea has been denuclearized.
In conclusion, although nuclear technology has some positive outcomes , it can be very dangerous in its non military uses. It is better to leave the nuclear technology as well as weapons permanently to live safely on this earth.
- In western countries many people spend lots of money on their pets They buy special food for their cats and dogs but them toys and often pay high fees for their medical treatment Some people think this is a waste of money and argue that pets are dirty 84
- Some people say that what children watch influences their behavior. Others believe the amount of time they spend on television influences their behavior most.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 78
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social and practical problems .to what extent do you agree or disagree?Give reasons of your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 73
- Some people believe that unpaid community services should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children).To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern lifestyle. What are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, may, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25352112676 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7516334442 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609154929577 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8997826461 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225970761724 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712033636278 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574253157503 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122273573521 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493333999219 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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