You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to manager of the hotel. In your letter:
Say where you think you left the papers
Explain why they are important
Tell the manager what you want him/her to do.
Dear sir or madam,
I attended a meeting yesterday which was organised by contest on Bank for its regional managers in your hotel at plaza building. When I got back home, I discovered that an important file was missing from my briefcase, which consisted of important contracts and legal stamps which I have to deliver to oner of our important client the day after tomorrow.
If I try to recall, on the day of incident, I left the meeting post lunch, since I had to go home for an emergency. If I am to believe I had the file till I reached reception area, and had to attend a call, so I must have left at the reception desk, since the call was announced for me from reception. As already told, since these documents are to be delivered to a client by day after tomorrow as the statutory deadline to submit the papers falls exactly day after tomorrow, failing which we may face huge penalty.
Therefore, I would request you to send these documents to me latest by tomorrow. I understand, it may be difficult for you to send to a different city which is miles apart from from your city, but it would be of great help to me.
Looking forward for a quick response.
Yours faithfully,
James.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir or madam, I attended a meeting yesterday which was...
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Line 6, column 59, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'me the latest'.
Suggestion: me the latest
... request you to send these documents to me latest by tomorrow. I understand, it may be di...
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Line 6, column 173, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: from
...o a different city which is miles apart from from your city, but it would be of great hel...
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Line 10, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a quick response. Yours faithfully, James.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, therefore, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49771689498 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58943970259 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593607305936 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 1.83505154639 381% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.6625614518 44.8134815571 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.444444444 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 16.8248392259 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17741171594 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677293246849 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444521375184 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0839219904179 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519532632984 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.