The professional workers such as doctors, nurses and teachers should be paid more than the sports and entertainment stars or personalities. Do you agree or disagree?
Sports and entertainment industry have been drawing a lot of attention from workers for its appealing paycheck nowadays. However, some people say that professionals such as doctors, nurses and teachers should have higher salaries than those who involve in sports and entertainment media. In my opinion, I believe this statement is true in every aspects.
On the one hand, there are no reasons to pay for sports and entertainment celebrities when these people are already receiving money directly from their followers. For instance, when a musician decides to organize a live show, he or she should usually gain from the audience a substantial amount of money which could be equivalent up to a year of income from other occupations. Thus, it can be easily conclude that these ‘so-called’ workers do not even need to be paid by other people. In fact, they should be the ones who pay for their behind-the-stage staffs or coaches to support them.
On the other hand, physicians, nurses and teachers should be rewarded with higher salary for taking a massive amount of stress and responsibility for their jobs. Firstly, it takes an incredibly long time to become a professional and consume a tremendous amount of money for tuitions to build up their skills and knowledge when people decide to follow these careers. For example, a doctor has to pay approximately over 300 thousand dollars for the whole course and go through 6 years of academic studying without failing every stressful examination. For this reason only, professional workers should be paid more after they graduate and start their careers. Secondly, while sports and entertainment stars work in the working hours, professionals often work extra time with night shifts. Therefore, they definitely deserve to have more income than the others as an encouragement to work for additional time.
In conclusion, I believe that professionals should be paid more than the sports and entertainment stars.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23028391167 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05535772359 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574132492114 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0768940463 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.428571429 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4285714286 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300691697637 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11558854926 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110595392852 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237943082564 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0992666135037 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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