For the past year you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue your membership. Write letter to the club Secretary.
In your letter-
State what type of membership you have
Have have you paid
Give details of how you benefited from the club
Explain why you want to leave.
Respected sir,
I am a member of "Goldy's Health Club" with full time membership for next 6 months. I paid for the membership on your online portal through my debit card.
I am sorry to inform you that I have to withdraw my membership because I and my family are moving to a new location, and it is so far that it makes it very inconvenient to travel to the club in time. However, I should tell you that during my time at the club I had gained 5 kg of muscle mass and my posture has also improved. The personal trainer helped me increase my stamina and endurance. Not to mention, I feel energetic in the morning as opposed to the regular fatigue. Not only that but I also learnt better eating habits. Now, I look at my food in terms of protein and carbohydrates instead of potatoes pees, beans and stuff.
I hope you understand my situation and will refund the leftover amount. I will be very thankful.
Yours obedient
Jack Fuller.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2018-07-09 | Bikram1992 | 73 | view |
| 2018-07-09 | Bikram1992 | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 54, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... of 'Goldys Health Club' with full time membership for next 6 months. I paid fo...
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Line 3, column 508, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...atigue. Not only that but I also learnt better eating habits. Now, I look at my food i...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... will be very thankful. Yours obedient Jack Fuller.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 773.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44252873563 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64270971767 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655172413793 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8622034875 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.2727272727 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8181818182 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199741058359 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627197038412 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588095622191 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12258068742 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236278315951 0.0580467560999 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.