Modern technology is now very common in most workplaces. How do you think it has changed the way we work? Do you think there are more disadvantages then advantages?
In recent times, workplaces are occupied by modern technology. The work culture has changed tremendously due to these inventions. Despite the fact that these inventions made work fast and efficient, it has adversely impacted the mental health of employees.
First of all, with inventions like the internet and computers, paperwork is completely replaced by rapid and efficient software. Usually, time-consuming tasks like calculations are replaced by Microsoft excel files, paperwork with PowerPoint presentations and hand drawings with modern drafting tools. Secondly, communication which is essential for teamwork in the workplaces has changed with mobile phones and the internet. Applications like WhatsApp, Gmail and Skype made office meetings very convenient without confiding workers into geographical boundaries. As a result, the work culture is completely revolutionized making lives much easier.
However, there are some evident disadvantages due to this technology which outweighs advantages completely. On the one hand, the internet and software made work rapid and efficient. On the other hand, modern work culture is more burdensome and affecting the mental and psychological health of employees. Unlike older times, during which workers had limited number of working hours, these days with mobile and the Internet, employees are constantly connected to work even after office hours and work is spilling into evenings, weekends and vacation time constraining time which was previously reserved for family. As a result, modern workers are affected by lifestyle diseases like anxiety, depression, and obesity which is inadvertently caused by technology.
In conclusion, undoubtedly workplaces have become much more efficient with modern technology but it has stricken an uneasy balance in the life of employees. It is imperative to use technology in a limited manner.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a limited manner" with adverb for "limited"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ees. It is imperative to use technology in a limited manner.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to use technology in a limited manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82608695652 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.064900453 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572463768116 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1447882659 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.2 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119284494876 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444330442986 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270379162969 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0768976053622 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023342567612 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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