nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products . some people argue that tgese experiments shoulx br banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is truly said that "Science is simply the word we use to describe a method of organizing our curiosity". With the steady growth in technology, the lifestyles of people have been greatly affected. They have achieved various milestones. however some issues remain unchallenged and complex as ever. one such issue here is of animal experimentation. This particular topic asserts that whether the experiments on animals should be carried out or not? through this essay, i shall explore the dimensions of this topic and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side, there are a group of people who believe that animal experiments are should not be carried out and these should be banned. They strenghthen their viewpoint by claiming that the procedures are stated as illegal and a human holds no right to kill the innocent animals to satisfy his own desires. This results in draining of kindness and killing innocent animals like rats, guinea pigs and monkeys. the animals too hqve their families but they are killed ruthlessly by harmful toxins which damage their heart, kidneys in just a few seconds.The best epitome of this would be an article published by University of Delhi which stated that 70% of guinea pigs have been killed by introducing killing toxins into their peritoneal cavity which has caused a drastic decline in their population which further is damaging the bio diversity.
On the flip side, there are antagonists to this assertion who believe that animal experiments should be done for the benefits to humanity. They bolster their viewpoint by claiming that there are some incurable killing diseases like cancer ; the experiments of cancer medicines should be done on animals in order to check the reactions of medicine, treating time, effects of medicines which can be very harmful to humans if performed on them. for instance, the experiment of skin cancer medicine is done on the skin of rabbits but if the test is done on human skin, then it would cause drastic side effects. So some people tend to believe that to its better to keep some animals at stake to save the humanity.
Nevertheless, weighing both the options, I believe that there are many solutions to this question but i take this ground that an effective clap requires both use of hands and animals can be used for experiments to some extent for the advantage to mankind but this should be kept in mind that it does not lead to their death and the technology should definitely find one or the other alternative to animal experiments to save the bio diversity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, then, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2135.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 433.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93071593533 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69108740311 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505773672055 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 678.6 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.00863541 49.4020404114 245% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 133.4375 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0625 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192833524603 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671435861447 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460794930576 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126914675143 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391756401462 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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