More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and many are endangered. What are the causes of it and what measures can be taken to solve it?
In the recent years, there is a significant decrease in the number of wild animals, and they are on the verge of the extinction. There is a negative impact of this on the biological ecosystem. This essay will discuss the different causes of extinction for wild animals and different measures that can be taken to solve this problem.
There are a number of causes for extinction of wild animals. One of them is that, hunting and poaching of wild animals for there body parts. This is because animal's body parts are used in making of different luxury products and are sold under the name of big brands. It is important to note that every year many wild elephants are killed for their ivory in African jungles and many precious items are created from this. It can be observed that animal poaching and hunting is one of the cause for the extinction of wild animals and in-turn they are getting endangered.
There are many steps with which we can deal with this problem more effectively. Firstly, at the individual level, people can boycott products that are made from animal body parts. Secondly, the government can create tough laws and prosecute people who are involved in crimes against wild animals. Last but not the least, forest officials can keep a close eye on wild animals and protect them. With the help of these measures, wild animals can be protected from becoming extinct and endangered.
This essay discussed the reason for wild animals becoming extinct and different measures that can be taken to prevent this. In my opinion, everyone should work at their own level to protect the wild animals and biological ecosystem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.5418719212 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41745354302 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478571428571 0.580463131201 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 430.2 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9496372467 50.4703680194 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.6666666667 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355850660831 0.242375264174 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125790853906 0.0925447433944 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862268993743 0.071462118173 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227351594125 0.151781067708 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152686349735 0.0609392437508 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.32886699507 86% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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