Animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicine and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals suffer . While other are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity . Discuss both views and own opinion
'Medicine is a science of uncertainty and an art of probability' . With the steady growth in modernisation. The life style of people have greatly effected. The have achieved various milestone. Some issues remains unchallenged and as complex as ever. This topic asserts that should people have experiments on animal for safety purposes through development ; should be banned or not? through this essay. I shall explore assertion from various aspects into following paragraphs.
In summary, that experiments on animals have either so many benefits used at limited range or although they have great influence on destroyed the animal life through it cause dangerous situation.
Taking one side of argument, which use of animals for experimental processes . Because either human safety or development. Moreover, they have great impact on living things; those have lose of diversity. On moving, animation is greatly effected that is more and more dangerous experiment taken on animals . regarding this, animals life through become go into extinction. Futhermore, animals feel uncomfortable through this types of activities did by human beings The best epitome of this would be that a survey is conducted by Indian company of manufacturers of chemical products. Whereas, gives the awareness about experiments on animal is suitable only minimum ratio rather that more use of animals for experiments neither animals live comfortably nor feel well automatically their beings also go into extinction.
On flip side, some people believe that human have no right of doing the experiments on animals. However, they have great impact on living life . Moreover, through it that human have no right because anything no say that they doing the experiments on animals. While, which is beneficial for human life. Although, human beings for safety purposes use of animals to experiments. On moving, that is no right because we destroyed the animals life. The claiming that human beings have great influence on animals life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, whereas, while, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43269230769 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82336323416 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519230769231 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.5325821015 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.6956521739 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5652173913 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30434782609 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269464937574 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804790924853 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727926403877 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175495689065 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324322608803 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.62 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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