The best way to reduce the traffic accident is to make all young drivers complete a safe driving course before being licence to drive discuss.
In globalised era, lots of accident are happend in each year . The most of the accident are caused by voilating the traffing rules and high speed. These traffic accidents can be reduced by make all drivers perfect in driving vehicles . I will discuss my views in the further piece of writing .
Taking one side of the arguments, there are many causes behind accident cases . First and foremost, people are driving vehicles with very high speed especially youngster because they have no patience regarding rules and regulations. So that is why young generation are drived vehicles by rash driving also they easily move one place to another in few minutes . As a result, accident cases are inclined by large amount nowadays. The particular refer to example of drink and drive . Mostly masses drink afterthat they can drive . Secondly, individuals have not only traffic rules but also knowledge like how to drive .In addition to , people have no more knowledge regarding rules as well as regulations. There is no doubt, that type of masses are not attending driving classes in school .
On the second hand, drivers should attended driving course before licence to drive . Undoubtedly, it is very beneficial for traning the drivers . Moreover, human beings have more knowledge in case of that rules which are very essential. If drivers are attending these courses they can easily get knowledge automatically accidents cases decrease because people are know about safety measures. For instance, approximately all the foreign country provide driving course to drivers before licence. As a result, aacident cases are less as compare to other developing countries.
Hammering on the last nail, we should follow not only rules and regulation but also driving course. As a result, accident problem will decrease. There is no denying, aacident is the biggest stigma on the earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in addition, no doubt, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22259136213 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62866631351 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554817275748 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4095571095 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8571428571 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2380952381 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345946763165 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999134608881 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10725585442 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204572723285 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843095329414 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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