It’s a fact that crime rates have increased a lot nowadays. It’s seen around us and also in most of the cities of the world that these perpetration are being committed by the younger generation in several cases. There are many reasons behind this sin which needs to be worked at to overcome the adverse effects.
Today, we are leaving in such a society where everyone is running behind the money to earn more and more to maintain our lifestyle and to showcase the status symbol. We have become absorbed to earn more and don’t have time for our families and kids. Likewise, Schooling also has become a business platform therefore doesn’t care about a younger one moral education and discipline. In lack of family attention and negligence from school, our juvenile feels frustrated. They fall in a bad company of friends. Also, they become internet orphans so internet, television and video games also influence them to go on wrong path sometime. Initially they might have committed this guilt under influence of the atmosphere they have or for adventure as they think but later it becomes a major offense. Poverty is also another big factor which obligate a young one to supersede the law. At the end, unemployment also plays a significance role to promote the crime in youngsters.
To overwhelm this prejudicial effect on our society, a good parenting and moral education are mandatory facts. Children and youngsters need attention, emotional attachments with families and enough time to spend together. A proper guidance and counseling can help them to beat this monster called crime.
To conclude, I would suggest that It’s responsibility of adults to prepare their younger one with good atmosphere and moral values to keep them away from delinquency rather than running behind the earnings. It's not the money but kids are the actual asset who will serve them in future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this perpetration' or 'these perpetrations'?
Suggestion: this perpetration; these perpetrations
...in most of the cities of the world that these perpetration are being committed by the younger gene...
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Line 7, column 213, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...ather than running behind the earnings. Its not the money but kids are the actual a...
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Line 7, column 281, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...re the actual asset who will serve them in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07961783439 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70091671727 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617834394904 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0057666168 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8235294118 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23529411765 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117547119972 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0346785290392 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420698698562 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0790164486054 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670678419611 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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