The tendency of human being to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?
The fact cannot be denied that human beings always imitate one another in terms of fashion clothes and consumer good. I agree with the statement but the rapid increase in popularity of this customary has a negative side too. Let’s have a look to discuss its impact in individual’s life.
In this world, every rational and irrational animal has a propensity to copy others to let themselves feel exhilarated. Indeed, every human being from all age group have this tendency which is inherent among themselves. This aptitude they learn right from their cradle when they copy their mother and call her back mum. It had been and has been seen that popularity to replicate others in terms of fashion and consumer goods are increasing gradually to rapidly in the modern age.
To begin with, it makes the people lazy and dependent on others, therefore they don’t take their own decisions on their personal choices. For example, a person started following a celebrity and started using outfit like him but have forgotten that he is not as much fit as the celebrity is, so it would not suit him. Similarly, in terms of consumer goods too where people follow their surroundings to show off equal status in the society. For instance, when a person next door to me will bring a car then I would also go for one to show them that I also stand somewhere. Therefore, these unnecessary expenses such as buying expensive attire, luxury cars, costly gadgets, white goods and so on have converse effects on a family budget and sometimes could be the reason of financial crisis too.
All said and done, to follow the jonses is not a piece of cake for everyone. I feel that to replicate others should be avoided but it cannot be removed completely as it is inherent within us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 246, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to right'
Suggestion: to right
...ng themselves. This aptitude they learn right from their cradle when they copy their ...
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Line 6, column 194, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...completely as it is inherent within us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, similarly, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79220779221 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56835010203 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600649350649 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5193431398 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.428571429 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173361212987 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578256014262 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797257633835 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113590018808 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083132791516 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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