Scientists tell us that some activities are good for health and others are bad. Despite knowing that, millions of people continue doing unhealthy activities. What are the causes and what are the solutions for this?
It’s a human nature which attract people easily towards bad habits despite of healthy habits. Some activities are scientifically proven healthy, and some others are cranky. But still, people adopt the activities which are bad for wellbeing. We’ll discuss in this essay about reasons and possible solutions to address this concern.
In the modern age, mindset of people has changed, they put their life on stake and keep searching pleasure and enjoyment no matter how harmful the effects are. Firstly, some bad habits can make a person addictive such as smoking and excessive use of alcohol. Therefore, a person can be easily caught into a net and biggest cause of this is a circle of bad companions, hereupon it becomes hard nut to crack to come out of this. Moreover, sedentary lifestyle of people doesn’t allow them to be active to reform themselves and to do some exercise to stay fit. For instance, a person working into a global organization works round the clock in rotational shifts.
To address this, multiple solutions can be proposed. One of which is imposing higher taxes on unhealthy products such as cigarette, alcohol and food with high concentration of fat. In addition, a healthy lifestyle should be promoted, and likewise unhealthy lifestyle should be criticized all over in newspapers and televisions. Moreover, people with a self-sense to stay fit see that everybody is following the good practices, So, I believe that they would find it easier to break their destructive way of live life.
To conclude that indulgences of people with unhealthy activities are mainly caused by the addictions to certain things. It is not easy to change people mindset to remove these bad habits but can be stopped with a self-initiative and strong willpower.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, likewise, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12027491409 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8372187905 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604810996564 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9327316437 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22826551523 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783957538448 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493260699717 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140443998426 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628803524069 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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