Do the advantages of the study abroad outweigh its disadvantages
In fact that, become a oversea student is a dream of the parents in today’s society. In my perspective, the pros and cons of learning oversea are equally significant.
On the one hand, students in highly education country have a lot of benefits. Concerning the first, by far greatest is that people can get more knowledge and improving their skill such as: teamwork, leader, community… Actually, students can learn all newest research of top point scientist on the world and do more some research by themselves. For instance, most of the students can speak English very fluently after two years. Another negative important that needs to be taken into account is that a large employments opportunities. Indeed, applicants who have a good certificate can apply many firms with high salary annual. Aside that employer can offer opportunity immigration for workers if they meet all condition from authority in immigration programs.
On the other hand, there are some concerns about the influence of living cost in other country. The main drawback is high expenditure of students in the oversea. According many recent surveys, most of the universities have a high fee about 20.000-40.000 USD per year and living cost estimates from 10.000-20.000 USD per years, meanwhile in the developing countries family’s income about 10.000-30.000 USD per. Therefore, despite most parents hope their children is going to abroad for study, but with big expenses are a barrier for their dream. Another negative aspect is the loss of traditions and habits. Increasingly culture exchange with local residents makes behavior of student change a little bit daily.
In conclusion, both the benefits of learning in other country and its possible risks have the same degree of importance
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...ents makes behavior of student change a little bit daily. In conclusion, both the benefit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28268551237 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91316129986 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628975265018 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6478555077 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0309428296862 0.244688304435 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00872682629297 0.084324248473 10% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0180033762774 0.0667982634062 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0221575256799 0.151304729494 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207080793681 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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