Fast food is becoming a part of our daily life. Some people argue that fast food
has negative effects on our lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree.
Nowadays, every corner of the area in the city has a wide choice of fast food available. Franchises and brands also handy for the fast food in current time. But it is not favorable for health, saturation of fast food urge many diseases. Fast food is one of the conveniently available tummy filler but, damn for health.
Stomach obstacles are constantly rising in children and younger. Diseases like obesity, diabetes, heart obstacles are increasing very fast in the city due to the quality of the food. For instance, a restaurant not consistently cooks food on the spot, sometimes they serve old food and it has many chances to influence diseases.
Extensive brands like 'Burger King', 'U.S.Pizza' provides qualitative food to their customers. So, people love the service and good food there. Today 'Burger Kings' is one of the big chain business fast food sector. The company gives tremendous service to the customers to make fast food available in just 5 minutes. The online order also in trending in this techno time using the internet and mobile application.
In Conclusion, people should take care of their health and restrict the fast food to leave healthy life else be ready to pass more time in a hospital.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Pizza
... Extensive brands like Burger King, U.S.Pizza provides qualitative food to their cust...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 20.9802955665 29% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 1207.87684729 83% => OK
No of words: 205.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91219512195 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57112506825 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 139.433497537 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60487804878 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 379.143842365 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0308956012 50.4703680194 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.4615384615 104.977214359 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7692307692 20.9669160288 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 7.25397266985 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202484418706 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791633151041 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042042115236 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128207018992 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303802354368 0.0609392437508 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 12.6369458128 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 60.5 Out of 90
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