The illustrations reveal the stages of the life cycle of a lady bug and its anatomical parts as an adult insect. It is clearly seen that there are 4 phases in the life of the bug and its adult form has 8 distinguishing parts.
Eggs are laid by an adult lady bug in leaves of various trees. These are left attached in the leaves and these will hatch after 2 to 5 days producing larvas. The second phase is called larval stage and they remained larva for 21 days and after which they undergo to the pupa stage. The pupas remained underside of leaves for a week and after developing inside the cocoons adult lady bugs emerge.
A lady bug has a distinct feature telling it apart from other insect and it is called the red elytra which gives the bug its red color and circle dots on its wings. It also has 6 legs, 3 on each side connected to its body which is the abdomen and a head with 2 antennas and a pair of eyes. Its head is connected to its body by pronotum a black colored area of its body with 2 white dots on each side.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 336, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ead is connected to its body by pronotum a black colored area of its body with 2 ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.13930348259 4.92477711251 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20358137965 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537313432836 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.357201232 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.4444444444 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110246235861 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564479620569 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724013366087 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932865945512 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791481329111 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.03 11.4140731707 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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