Nuclear power is a necessary evil despite the potential human and environmentals consequences as radioactive fallouts , nuclear energy is a genuine alternative to non - renewable energy sources like oil and coal. Which are quickly running out. In short, the benefits of nuclear power outweigh the risks of using it.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this era of modernisation where science is considered as a boon for us. There is no doubt, science had invented many things. One of the most important development that is nuclear power. 'Every coin has two sides '. The given topic asserts that nuclear power has more either merits: or demerits? I agree with this statement. My piece of writing will discuss pros and cons of this power in the upcoming paragraphs before reaching at any conclusion.
Taking one side of the argument, nuclear energy great source of the energy that is non-renewable. Undoubtedly, it has more merits as compare to demerits.first and foremost, it keeps the environment not only clean but also green because it is an alternative source of fossil fuels like petrol,diesel, coal,and natural gas.secondly, it keeps less amount of raw material as a result, nuclear energy is very helpful for research only energy source which help the homosapeins to land on other space. As we know, sunita William went to other planet just because of research. The particular refer to example of cancer is a disease which is harmful for masses but, nuclear energy are used for treatment of cancer. Moreover, it emit radioactive substance.
On the flip side, these nuclear energy can destroy the whole planet . However, it produce very harmful radiations which is very dangerous for all living things. For instance, as we know in Nagasaki nuclear bomb blast by USA,and in case of that bomb all living things were totally destroy and they no life were about 20 years . Furthermore, nuclear power should be provide infrastructure by proper care and maintenance, if a nuclear reactor explost, it will emits radioactive waves which damage Everything.
In conclusion, I believe that there is no single conclusion we should provide great care to nuclear power, and it is big responsibility of government provide good infrastructure. So that is why we should easily protect nuclear power because it has not only merits but also demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11890243902 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87188050407 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.4489568243 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2777777778 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259888231247 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746078713673 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720292698453 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145083145955 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665302950908 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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