Some people believes that children leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?
With the rise in modernisation where children are considered as a boon for us, and without children life is a full of darkness. Undoubtedly, the given topic asserts that should children spending leisure activities either on educational:or not? I disagree with this statement. My piece of writing will discuss my views in the upcoming paragraphs before reaching at any conclusion.
Taking one side of the argument, there are people who believe that spending leisure activities time in educational is waste of time. They raise many asseration defence such as if student are done education by leisure activities they feel Very bore because children already utilise time more in study.Moreover, this problem will create less interest in education for students, and children are preying of depression. As a result, learners are automatically sufferd by more harmful ailments such as Lipid. The further refer to example of the sharpness of brain of chidren will decrease.
There is no doubt, should students create more interest in other leisure activities like sports, singing, and dancing because these tasks not only incresse creativity But also sharpness of brain of students. However, learners can easily enjoy skills by doing these activities. At last but not least, chidren can easily balance their study , and leisure tasks. In addition to, they do not sufferd by diseases regarding health. For instance, health is wealth.
Hammering on the last nail, learners should have interest not only in study but also other activities. As a result, the creative power of students will increase.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, for instance, in addition, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49206349206 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79274675804 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 63.7813626557 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219657729846 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620848472884 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754453479046 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10994024317 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766630179678 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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