In many countries eighteen is considered the right age to start driving a car. However, some people say that the legal during age should be twenty five. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the modern era, different mode of transportation are available for travelling purpose like bus, car, motorbike and many more. One of the most pressing concern is regarding the give topic which is the right age; eighteen and twenty five should be start driving a car? I shall explore same from various aspects with my opinion in the following paragraph.
On one side, there is a group of who believe that youngage is appropriate stage for begin driving. Because they think at this age youth are more interested in learing driving as well as they learn driving rules about direction, trafic signals and so on in driving schools. As far as they have not much experience regarding driving, and number of accidents and injuries are happen because of them. However they do not give first aid to injured people because they are affraid from various things like police verification, crime punishment etc. A good illustration of this In my city more than 100 accidents per month occuring by teenagers.
Contrary to this, there is an opposing group of people who believe that twenty five age is legaly acceptable for driving. At this stage youngster gets good experience as well as their mental ability is enhanced. When they are driving with family so ultimately the car speed is not high because in this level youngone's well known about person value for their kith and kin. But in some cases accidents are rapidly increase because at this age number of dwellors are consuming drink alchocal, drugs and other harmful tonic therefore after consuming these things they lose control from thereself and they do such things they are not intended to do.
Neverthless, weighing both the opinions i tend to believe that, there is no single conclusion. Still i take this ground tewnty to twenty five age should be suitable for driving with legal indentification and learing rules certificate. As well as government take a strict action and save million of the people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, regarding, so, still, therefore, well, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94545454545 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57097595387 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572727272727 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6465691898 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.8 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218338453208 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734529644373 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0990074507032 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155021377957 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081174862469 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.