The charts below show the percentage of water used for diffrenet purposes in six areas of the world.

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The charts below show the percentage of water used for diffrenet purposes in six areas of the world.

The given circular representation reveals the information about the consumption of water for diffrent purposes in six areas of the nation. The data is caliberated in percentum.
It is evident, the water used in three sector such as: Industrial, Agricultural and Domestic. Initially, the much demand of water in agricultural field in four distinct areas like South America, Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia respectively, 71%, 84%, 88%, and 81%. However, a little quantity of water used for domestic purposes, it is around 5% -12% in all areas.
Moreover, in case of industrial sector the demand of water more than half in Europe as well as less than half in North America. While, did not much use of water in South America, Africa and Central Asia it respectively 10%, 7% and 5%.
Overall, it is clearly seen that the maximum water consumed for agricultural purposes, and the limited use of water for domestic work.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 40, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'sector' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'sectors'.
Suggestion: sectors
... It is evident, the water used in three sector such as: Industrial, Agricultural and D...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, well, while, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 772.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98064516129 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80147129473 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587096774194 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0366414411 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 5.23603664747 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251988664394 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109696686725 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077639401168 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163624007148 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537127796296 0.0819641961636 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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