Every city across the world is dealing with a surge in a number of cars. Major cities across the world have twice the number of cars in comparison with the number of people in the city. Some class of people say that the construction of wider roads is a better alternative to counter the menace of traffic, whereas, there are some who hold a dissenting opinion about the same. The essay will deal with both sides followed by a suggestion opinion at the end.
On the one hand, the rising number of cars had sparked a debate to increase the number of lanes the roads have in general nowadays. The opinion is backed by the thought that the same will lead to more space on roads and smooth flow of traffic. This overhauling will allow vehicles to pass at a rapid pace and resultant which there will be less traffic. For example, the German Road Safety Organization had come with an effective solution to deal with the issue of traffic in the city of Berlin and it was proposed to extend the number of lanes on the roads and which would help in reducing the traffic by 49% during the peak hours. Therefore, it can be said that the small overhauling of the roads will lead to smoother roads.
On the other hand, there are some who feel that merely extension of roads and additions of lanes will not suffice. There are many problems which one cannot see but has been a root cause of the traffic in the cities. Moreover, the drivers do not possess the driving etiquette which is the nub of the problem. For instance, Transport for London which is the regulatory authority had in its 19th Submission before the House of Lords had stated that the driver was not adhering to the code of conduct and have been driving recklessly on pavements and there is no lane driving which has been clogging the streets of London. The government came up with the idea of strictly enforcing the laws and stringent actions being taken against the violators. Thus, the laws need to be changed with an effective implementation the change can bring about in the desired direction.
In conclusion, the effective solution to the problem can be said to be that the cities or the lawmaking agencies should come up with an effective method of imposition of hefty taxes on purchase of vehicles as majority of the cities have two or more cars per head in the cities and half of which are not even used. As a result, they are only parked on the roads causing traffic problems. The imposition of taxes will restrict people from purchasing a car and clogging the streets and counter the issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 41.998997996 188% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2102.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 461.0 315.596192385 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55965292842 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38884285256 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466377440347 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 652.5 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.9962027966 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.777777778 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6111111111 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203363984 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655205221876 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335829350597 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123666820422 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0147143535273 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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