The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie chart depicts the information about six contries of the world using water for different purposes. The data is calibrated in percentum.
To commence with, it can be seen that industries are consuming 48%, 10% ,and 53% of the water in countries such as north america, south america and europe respectively. Moreover, these countries are also using 39%, 71% and 32% of water in agriculture for farming. After that, domestic sector is absorbing 13%, 19% and, 15% of the water.
Moving ahead, it is noticed that in areas like Africa, Central asia and, South aisa that utilized 84%, 88% and, 81% of the water in cultivation respectively.Further more, in other sectors like industries and domestic used less water than agriculture among the countries Africa, central Asia and south Asia.
Overall, it is evident that maximum water was used in agriculture likewise, central asia was the country which consumed most of the water in husbandry.
- The chart below gives information about southland s main exports in current year 2018 and future projections of 2025 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where 87
- some believe that people should not continue to work once they reach the age of retirement. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include relavent examples from your experience. 78
- International travel makes people prejudiced rather than broad-minded. What are its causes and what measures can be taken to solve this problem? 73
- Restoration of old buildings in main cities involves enormous government expenditure. It would be more beneficial to spend this money to build new houses and roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include examples 67
- The given tabular chart reveals the information about for different secondary schools attended by pupils in what proportion among the years 2000, 2005, and 2009. 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, likewise, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13461538462 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81761943668 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621794871795 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.8978956147 43.030603864 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.428571429 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166132983259 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859096956145 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933056732733 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120602668346 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830264442769 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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