In some countries, it is illegal for an employer to reject job applications on the basis of age criteria. Is it a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.
There are several laws and policies in countries to run the nation on a progressive track. One of the most controversial issue today leads to that, rejecting job applications due to age criteria; it is either optimistic or pessimistic development? I totally agree that it is a positive development and in the further piece of essay, I am going to explain reasons for my answer through some assertions and examples and shape up my viewpoint by the end.
The first step to understand that, why it is a positive development rather than negative and what issues make it negative? Broadly speaking, the first prominent reason is child labour. In many countries there is a law which defines that children can not work under the age of 14. But, there are many children which still work and get hired by distinct factories for small works which is illegal. Therefore, this can lead to disadvantage for the growth of an economy and can be an issue in development, simultaneously. The second fundamental reason is education. If a child will work in the age of adapting knowledge than that will put detrimental affects on both child and on the economy because new generation is the future of nation. Hence, if some countries do not accept job applications on the basis of age that would be for the safety of an individual and of the economy.
The second step to understand that, why it is optimistic to accept job applications on the basis of age criteria? Generally speaking, the foremost reason is development. It is possible to say that if an individual will work at right age after completing their studied and will get best jobs according to their qualifications which can put positive impact on the economy. Similarly, if their will be more educated children then there will be more development. A good illustration is, in countries like america, it is ban on children to under the age of 14 and people are hired on the basis of their age criteria and America is one of the most developed countries compared to other nations which accept application of individuals by avoiding their age.
In conclusion, I tend to believe that, as technology has been enhanced and it takes an educated person to access them and I believe that without proper knowledge an individual can get harmed if they try to use such machines as safety of a person is most significant thing, while people should get proper education and then do jobs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... development. It is possible to say that if an individual will work at right age ...
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...if their will be more educated children then there will be more development. A good ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, second, similarly, so, still, then, therefore, while, broadly speaking, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2008.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 419.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7923627685 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86891576318 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470167064439 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 646.2 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.9415362467 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.117647059 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6470588235 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240479547734 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792001939239 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649197554231 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145157414083 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744816976223 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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