The bar charts below show the Marriage statistic and Divorce statistic for nine countries in 1981 and 1984.
The given bar charts reveal the information about the marriage and divorce statistic by the nine different countries: USA, UK, Japan, Finland, Germany, Fernce, Italy and Denmark in the year 1981 and 1984. It is the clear and coherent representation.
It can be seen that, in the year 1981 the number peoples belongs to marriage statistic in USA were near about 10 and in 1994, it was decreased to 9. Moreover, in Uk, marriage statistic were 7 in 1981 and near about 6 in 1994. Furthermore, in Japan, the marriage statistic were probably equal in both years 1981 and 1994. Apart from this, in Finland and Germany, the marriage statistic in 1981 were same in both countries but in 1994, it was slightly difference in the marriage statatic of both countries. At the last, in France, Italy and Denmark the marriage statistic were near about 5 and in 1994, it was also near about 5 in Fernce and Ftaly but in Denmark it was 7 respectively.
As fas as trend is concerned, in USA and Uk, in 1981, the divorce statistic were near about 5 and near about 3 but in 1994 it was 4.5 and 3.5. Moreover, in Japan and Finland, in 1981, people belongs to divorce statistic were near about 1 and 2 and in 1994, it was 1.5 and near about 3. Furthermore, in Germany, the divorce statistic were same in 1981 and 1994. Apart from that, in Fernce, Italy and Denmark, the number of people belongs to divorce statistic were 1.5, near about 0 and near about 3 in 1981 and in 1994 it was near about 2, 0.5 and 2.5 respectively.
Overall it is evident that, in USA, highest number of people were belongs to marriage statistic and on the other hand, least number of people were belong to divorce statistic in Italy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 451, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'differenced'.
Suggestion: differenced
... countries but in 1994, it was slightly difference in the marriage statatic of both countr...
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Line 7, column 35, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the highest'.
Suggestion: , the highest
...y. Overall it is evident that, in USA, highest number of people were belongs to marria...
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Line 7, column 118, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the least'.
Suggestion: , the least
...marriage statistic and on the other hand, least number of people were belong to divorce...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, apart from, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 7.0 314% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 6.8 397% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 33.7804878049 204% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 965.302439024 144% => OK
No of words: 308.0 196.424390244 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50649350649 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52177228744 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.347402597403 0.547539520022 63% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 404.1 283.868780488 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 3.36585365854 475% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.1236764403 43.030603864 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.181818182 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287937042944 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164146864293 0.103423049105 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833959960089 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219038917769 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599952528672 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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